Re-write or fix this paper,

Question Description

Please re-write or fix this. I am writing a paper on the escalation of Domestic violence when left unchecked and I do not want it to sound like an argument per say. A research paper is fine.

Be thorough and support all factual statements with a citation. Hit distinguished in the scoring guide.

This was written for me from another tutor. I am not happy with it and after the peer review this week, it isn’t good enough. Some of this paper can be used and my instructor will expect that. Facts need to be cited and statements or claims need to be backed by facts also.

You should expect to write between 5 and 7 pages, and use a minimum of 5 peer-reviewed, scholarly library sources for this paper. Your paper must include a cover page, a running head, in-text citations, and a complete reference list. You should also be sure to properly format the document with APA-appropriate margins (1 inch on top, bottom, and sides). You should also complete the following tasks:

Argue effectively for a claim on a topic for an academic audience.
Use accepted strategies for supporting a claim.
Assess opposing viewpoints and defend your claim.
Organize an argument clearly and coherently, using accepted organization patterns. Employ accepted APA standards for citing and documenting sources.
Communicate in a manner that is consistent with the standards and expectations of criminal justice professionals.

Requirements

In addition to the above tasks, be sure to meet the following requirements:

Written communication: Writing should be free of errors that detract from the overall message.
Style: Use current formal APA style and formatting.
Length of paper: 5–7 pages.
Sources: Minimum of five peer-reviewed, scholarly Capella University Library sources.
Font: Arial, 10 point.

Scoring guide

Criteria	Non-performance	Basic	Proficient	Distinguished
Argue effectively for a claim on a topic for an academic audience using appropriate materials to support the argument. 16%	Does not argue effectively for a claim on a topic for a non-academic audience using appropriate materials to support the argument.	Argues effectively for a claim on a topic for a non-academic audience using appropriate materials to support the argument.	Argues effectively for a claim on a topic for an academic audience using appropriate materials to support the argument.	Argues effectively for a claim on a topic for an academic audience using appropriate materials to support the argument and evaluates the quality of the materials.
Use accepted strategies for supporting a claim. 16%	Does not use strategies for supporting a claim.	Uses accepted strategies for supporting a claim but some strategies are not effective.	Uses accepted strategies for supporting a claim.	Uses accepted strategies for supporting a claim and evaluates the effectiveness of strategies in supporting the claim.
Assess opposing viewpoints, and defend the claim using appropriate materials to support the opposing viewpoints. 17%	Does not assess opposing viewpoints or defend the claim.	Assesses opposing viewpoints and defends the claim but does not use appropriate materials to support the opposing viewpoints.	Assesses opposing viewpoints and defends the claim using appropriate materials to support the opposing viewpoints.	Assesses opposing viewpoints and defends the claim using appropriate materials to support the opposing viewpoints and evaluates the quality of the materials.
Organize an argument clearly and coherently, using accepted organization patterns. 17%	Does not organize an argument clearly and coherently, using accepted organization patterns.	Organizes an argument but some aspects of the argument are not clear or coherent.	Organizes an argument clearly and coherently, using accepted organization patterns.	Organizes an argument clearly and coherently, using accepted organization patterns, and uses transitional statements from one topic to the next.
Employ current APA style and formatting standards for citing and documenting sources. 17%	Does not employ current APA style and formatting standards for citing and documenting sources.	Employs current APA style and formatting standards for citing and documenting some but not all sources.	Employs current APA style and formatting standards for citing and documenting sources.	Employs current APA style and formatting standards for citing and documenting sources consistently and without errors.
Communicate in a manner that is consistent with the standards and expectations of criminal justice professionals. 17%	Does not communicate in a manner that is entirely consistent with the standards and expectations of criminal justice professionals.	Communicates in a manner that is not entirely consistent with the standards and expectations of criminal justice professionals.	Communicates in a manner that is consistent with the standards and expectations of criminal justice professionals.	Communicates in a manner that is consistent with the standards and expectations of criminal justice professionals, and incorporates literature to support arguments and points.

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